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At 10:10pm on February 7, 2009, Sohair Abdel-Rahman said…
The Two Ds

( Diabetes & Depression)

One at a time,
Can not take
Two
Hidden in a womb
Refused to
Get
Born
Which will finish me first?
Him
Or
You

D&D
One of you
Has to change
His
D

Sohair
8 February 2009
At 3:46pm on February 7, 2009, Heidi98 said…
Well I woke Wednesday morning, with no way to hold my head that didn't hurt
And the Diet Coke I'd had for breakfast, wasn't bad, so I had two more for dessert
Then I stumbled to the nightstand, grabbed my meter and blew off all the dirt
Checked right in at 303..and knew I was more then ready to greet the day!

I'd blown my luck the night before, with Chinese food-complete with all the fixings
As I changed my set, the needle bled and so I screamed like the dickens
Then I drove by a DQ, and caught a glance of someone eating ice cream
And well, it took me back to something
That I knew I'd lost somewhere, somehow, along the way.

On a DQ restaurant sidestreet
I'm wishin' so, that I was cured
Cuz' there's something in a Sundae
That makes the body, know you'll pay
And there's nothing short of DKA
That's half as effective, as the threat
Of a dripping, gooey Sundae
Putting you in loads of debt.

Though I know the pump won't ever stop the swinging
And sometimes, it’s too hard to sort the choices life keeps flinging
As I head back home, and somewhere very close a fire truck is shrieking
It will echo through my memories, reminding me of why control’s worth seeking.

On a DQ restaurant sidestreet
I'm wishin' so, that I was cured
Cuz' there's something in a Sundae
That makes the body, know you'll pay
And there's nothing short of DKA
That's half as effective, as the threat
Of a dripping, gooey Sundae
Putting you in loads of debt.
At 11:27am on February 7, 2009, Mel said…
Normal?
A disease covered by the shroud of normality
Invisible to the unknowing eye
The calloused fingers?
Too small to see
An infusion site?
Merely a wrinkle of clothing
An insulin pump?
A cell phone, pager? Perhaps an MP3 player
The lows, the highs?
Just the mood swings of a wrestles teenager.

The pain of an uncertain future
A child, a teenager, an adult
Fighting for a future
Fighting for dignity
Fighting for a life to be proud of.

No one understands
I may appear normal, healthy, like everyone else
I am not the same
I am fighting for my life
Every hour of every day
Every blood droplet
Every needle poke
Every gram of carbohydrate
Every button press.

It is a silent battle.
Sometimes I am winning
Sometimes I am losing
But in the end, I will be victorious.
At 6:07am on February 7, 2009, chocoholic said…
I'm really trying to stay "low-carb"
But finding it so hard.
My mood keeps changing daily,
As I crave all foodstuffs barred.

I've tried to think of other things
But running through my head
Are thoughts of spuds and pasta
And chunks of crusty bread.

I just can't get excited
Over salad,veg and meats
I've really tried but failed
To enjoy those low-carb "eats".

I don't smoke or drink alcohol.
I eat a balanced diet.
And when I heard of low-carb
I really had to try it.

I started off so very well
And full of good intention
But now I'm simply going ape
At every "low-carb" mention.

My readings have gone mad again
I cannot fathom why.
I'm feeling so confused
And I've even had a cry.

You lot are so supportive
And I know this sounds pathetic
But please tell me I am normal....
For hating being DIABETIC!
At 10:41am on February 6, 2009, Xanthasun said…
You were never invited, still you came.
Probing your traits, learning all you demand
At first, too young to fully understand
That now my life would never be the same.
Careful calculation, everything planned
But a slight misjudgment, too large a dose
Blood sugar dropping! Quick! Take some glucose!
Attacked, I struggled and retook command.
It's not countless needles that pain me most,
But 'gainst your complications, endless guard
And if you're revealed, others’ views are marred.
Our insep'rable fate leaves me morose.
Diabetes, my rival meshed within,
Deny you, I die; Accept you, I win.
At 12:07am on February 6, 2009, jay said…
darling i cant kiss you any more doctor tole me to keep asway from sugrry cholcattee and furity things. may be iwill kiss you when my sugarlevel is nirmal. with regards!
At 11:11pm on February 5, 2009, Brad L said…
Coming to the Senses

Hope is in the eyes
Of our mothers, lovers, friends, and brothers,
In those reproachful looks they give us
As we reach for another cookie.

Hope is in the ears
When we go on our sunset strolls,
The trees waving as we pass them,
The birds singing our congratulations.

Hope is in the nose
That turns up at old, haunting habits,
That remembers to breath for us
When things become overwhelming.

Hope is in the mouth,
In the tongues of our eyes and feet
That tell us over and over
How apples are actually tastier than donuts.

Hope is in the hands,
In the tired, calloused fingers
That still find the time for typing,
Sending stories and encouragement to others.

And, of course, hope is in the heart,
That is forever coming to these senses,
Ready to give all of the love
That we are willing to accept.
At 5:30pm on February 4, 2009, Don KB said…
To The Diabetic

Ruby on the finger tip
swells sweet like pine sap,
tiny gem of light.

The need for sugar
fluid the hummingbird
sucks for life,

surges. It fills you,
swells to thickening.
An organ out of sync.

Numbers count out
the span of a disease,
its grasp on your being.

listen not to those
who would say
that you caused this.

Live.
At 11:23am on February 4, 2009, Linda Gauvin-Miller said…
THANK YOU?
The leaves,
amber and copper
gilt edged.
Others again
chartreuse and mossy
the dome, nature's Chartres.
Here, there...stippled
lilac
mulberry
mauve...
a dusting of blossom pink.
Dazzling,
the sky...
beyond blue
beyond aqua
words cannot suffice.
Thank you dear God,
thank you.
The brilliance blinds, overwhelms.
'tis not Autumn,
nor Summer,
nor yet Spring
which cause these colours to sing,
but an oncoming low
which is preceded,
as a silver lining,
by colours beauteous;
an aura beyond compare...
but beware
soon will follow
trembling and sorrow.
Panicked and damp,
which sweets do
r e s t o r e
to begin once more.
At 11:07am on February 4, 2009, Johnben. said…
Diabetic CAPTAIN...

I'm the Captain of my Ship
always in troubled waters.....
Sometimes it seems,
things are going Well
but then Suddenly
when least expected,
I must avoid the Sharp Rocks,
that want to destroy
my Ship from ALL Sides.
Must be Always Alert
Even when the Sea seems Calm.
Under the surface lurks trouble.
Must be Always Alert!
Always Alert.
At 10:48am on February 4, 2009, sugarrbabie said…
I'm No Quitter

Poke after poke
Fingers and arms endure
But so it is vital
To continue to live

Time after time
Hoping for once
To finally get it right
Just one time

Never the same
Always changing
Highs and lows
Come and go

But when it's
Right on target
All the ups and downs
Somehow seem worth it

Always fighting
Never giving up
Life is worth
All this frustration

Won't let it
Take control
I will always
Put up a fight

Always pushing forward
To find new ways
To keep on fighting
This life long disease

I won't give up
I won't give in
You will never
See me quit.
At 2:29pm on February 3, 2009, Devon said…
Reminded

The droplets of Red
That spill from my fingers,
Remind me
Daily
That a human life is a fragile thing
A finite creature
Requiring balance
And control
And consistency.

And the insulin pump
That hangs from my side,
Reminds me
Daily
That a human life is a precious thing
Soaking in Uncertainty
But, Certainly
Worth preserving
And cherishing.
At 2:02pm on February 3, 2009, Brittaney Nichols said…
25, Just starting to live,
but still no-sugar added.
Teacher is the joy delight
but still, no-sugar added.
Souls Mate found love all about
but still, no-sugar added
Baby.Cry..Pain...Cramp....Bleeding.....Miscarriage…….No Baby?
but still no-sugar added
Questions, love, confusion, life, crying, pain, stick, finger, bleed, only 25, baby, baby,
but still no-sugar added
At 8:49am on February 3, 2009, Emily Joy said…
Living in the fast lane, no time for problems, now.
I'm only seventeen! Who'd want to bring me down?
But God had different plans, they just might help me grow
Into a better person for everyone to know.

He gave me a disease. Why should I be angry?
I have my life. Friends. A family who loves me!
Maybe I can use this “curse” to help others around.
Lend a hand to those who have fallen to the ground.

Wishing
Fighting
Knowing
There will be a way.
Hoping
Waiting
Praying
To end the painful days.

They will never know the pain of tears I've cried.
Or how much it hurts to fail after I've tried.
Even though I say “I'm fine”, I really mean “don't ask.”
Lying to you feels like just another daily task.

Though the days are dreary. Just wanting to give in.
To giving up. Stop fighting this. No! I'm gonna win.
So help me help myself. Remind me what to do.
So that in the future, I'll be living life with you.
At 8:27am on February 3, 2009, Kirk Slusher said…
Over 75,000 punctures of my skin
Since '58, tomorrow I'll do it again
Some would ask why are you not weeping
My answer; cause I'm still not leaking

Again and again I puncture my skin
With time you learn just to grin
Some ask is your BS peaking
No it isn't and I'm still not leaking

Again and again I puncture my skin
All in response to sugar the sin
Some ask do you tire of pokes
Nope it is all in response to one of God's jokes
At 7:58am on February 3, 2009, Ginny said…
My Daughter

You are losing weight,
To much weight.
Why are you sick in the mornings,
I feed you healthy foods.
Quit drinking so much,
That’s why you do not eat your meals
Would you like some cake.
No cake-you want fruit.

Time to see a doctor
Doctor wants to do lab work
Go home and wait for the call
Phone rings
Doctor says blood count is 700
Your daughter has Juvenile Diabetes
Rush her to the ER

Start the changing process
Sweetheart its time to change the way you eat
Count Carbs
Watch sugar intake
Certain foods-spike
Certain foods-sink
So much learning,

My baby is growing up to fast
Her life is going to change
She is only a child

We tell our children to enjoy being young
It will go by so fast.
How are they to be young
When this has made them grow up so fast.

Do not be negative-Be positive.
We will teach others,
We will show others there is good in being a diabetic.
At 10:33pm on February 2, 2009, Sohair Abdel-Rahman said…


It is not about diabetes, my dear!!

It is not about diabetes
My dear
It is about
You
And
Me
No boundaries
No borders
No barriers
Can come
Between me
And
You

Teach the crazy world
My friend
Teach
With love
Love
Is the cure

3-February 2009
At 9:12pm on February 2, 2009, li0nandthelam13 said…
Diabetes
I'm sick of all the blood
I'm sick of all the pain
I'm sick of all the thoughts
This trouble puts in my brain

Always taking these shots
And always watching what I eat
And as all of this confusion builds up
It's becoming more impossible to defeat

As I wish and pray to be like everyone else
And as these tears fall from my eyes
I painfully continue
To hold back and hide my cries

You try putting a needle in your finger everyday
You try never being able to eat your way
You try having 2-4 shots to take
And then see how much you can take
At 7:52pm on February 2, 2009, Say H! !T$ B-MAN said…
Ive done it again!!!

Sadly enough ive done it again ive eaten something two minutes befor i need to test. My mom will be mad my dad will be sad and my hunger has done it once again. As i attempt to pretend it never happend my mom asks "what was your bg " and i reply " i did it agsin. Delete Comment
At 7:46pm on February 2, 2009, Jeff Kolok-parentingdiabetickids.com said…
SUGAR PIMPS

In her body like a cop on a beat,

You cover her streets, corners and alleys.

Three sixty-five or two-ten you tally,

A quick count, their numbers you must sweep.

Glucose, all sugar, is meant to be sweet.

Yet you, her Insulin, know it's not true.

Without your keen watch, like gangs they'll accrue.

Too little of you, their ranks will rally,

To wreak harm and pain, unabated, she dies.

Ah, but you too must be watched as you move,

No idle ally, proof cuts in her cries.

You'll kill her too, one punch fast, so smooth.

It ain't crook and cop, sugar and I-juice,

Just two pimps this diabetes let loose.

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